La Aurora Painting

muhren · 10-06-2009, 06:58 PM

Thoughts?

I'm not in love with the mouth yet. Still a work in progress I guess.

What do you guys think of the concept?

M

muhren · 10-06-2009, 07:19 PM

Draft 2...Slightly diff. mouth & more white smoke

M

Starscream · 10-06-2009, 07:26 PM

Nice!

RGD. · 10-06-2009, 09:36 PM

I couldn't draw a stick man with a straight edge - so I'm always impressed by the talent for it. That said and since you asked - I think the concept is great, but let's say if I was to commission that drawing I would like to see the smoke a lot more translucent, willowy, more of a whisper let's say. And maybe seeing the head from an angle/side ways.

Just me though.

Ron

muhren · 10-07-2009, 08:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RGD.

I couldn't draw a stick man with a straight edge - so I'm always impressed by the talent for it. That said and since you asked - I think the concept is great, but let's say if I was to commission that drawing I would like to see the smoke a lot more translucent, willowy, more of a whisper let's say. And maybe seeing the head from an angle/side ways.

Just me though.

Ron

R,

Couldn't agree more! This Lion is now being replaced. Well, he's been painted over and it's waiting to dry before another lion can be applied.

Look for the after in the near future. I love this concept...I just have to work it a bit to get it to work well.

M

JJG · 10-07-2009, 12:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RGD.

I think the concept is great, but let's say if I was to commission that drawing I would like to see the smoke a lot more translucent, willowy, more of a whisper let's say.

yeah I was going to say the same thing, the smoke could be a lot more subtle. great start though, can't wait to see the revised version!

WyGuy · 10-06-2009, 09:42 PM

Looks good!

Giant & 49er Fan · 10-06-2009, 09:49 PM

Awesome.

muhren · 10-07-2009, 12:33 PM

What do ya guys think of this one? A little more 'smokey'

M

10-07-2009, 12:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by muhren

What do ya guys think of this one? A little more 'smokey'

M

More of a fan of this one.

I'm no artist, but I like the idea of having the smoke make a leafy tree (think mushroom cloud shape).

Subtle play between the tree and the lion laying underneath it.

jwintosh · 10-07-2009, 12:59 PM

very nice!!

muhren · 10-07-2009, 09:25 PM

Sorry, I deleted the originals from my gallery on here...now, they're gone from the post. Well, at least the final piece is still there!

Azpostal · 10-08-2009, 03:29 PM

Nice painting.

10-06-2009, 06:58 PM	#1
muhren The Cigar Artist Join Date: Sep 2009 First Name: Mike Location: Ohio Posts: 1,268 Trading: (43)	La Aurora Painting Thoughts? I'm not in love with the mouth yet. Still a work in progress I guess. What do you guys think of the concept? M

10-06-2009, 07:19 PM	#2
muhren The Cigar Artist Join Date: Sep 2009 First Name: Mike Location: Ohio Posts: 1,268 Trading: (43)	Re: La Aurora Painting Draft 2...Slightly diff. mouth & more white smoke M

10-06-2009, 07:26 PM	#3
Starscream Knowhutimean, Vern? Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Andy Location: In a little town somewhere in the USA Posts: 10,237 Trading: (4)	Re: La Aurora Painting Nice! __________________ Insert quote here.

10-06-2009, 09:36 PM	#4
RGD. God Like Status Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Ron Location: Alexandria, Virginia Posts: 971 Trading: (1)	Re: La Aurora Painting I couldn't draw a stick man with a straight edge - so I'm always impressed by the talent for it. That said and since you asked - I think the concept is great, but let's say if I was to commission that drawing I would like to see the smoke a lot more translucent, willowy, more of a whisper let's say. And maybe seeing the head from an angle/side ways. Just me though. Ron

10-06-2009, 09:42 PM	#7
WyGuy Boiler Up! Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Mike Location: MN Posts: 1,359 Trading: (16)	Re: La Aurora Painting Looks good!

10-06-2009, 09:49 PM	#8
Giant & 49er Fan Formerly known as RPguy Join Date: May 2009 First Name: Jaime Location: McCovey Cove! Posts: 1,318 Trading: (35)	Re: La Aurora Painting Awesome. __________________ "This cigar tastes like the weekend!" - JBoogie

10-07-2009, 12:33 PM	#9
muhren The Cigar Artist Join Date: Sep 2009 First Name: Mike Location: Ohio Posts: 1,268 Trading: (43)	Re: La Aurora Painting What do ya guys think of this one? A little more 'smokey' M

10-07-2009, 12:59 PM	#11
jwintosh i have a confirmation #!! Join Date: Nov 2008 First Name: Jeffrey Location: San Diego Posts: 1,239 Trading: (15)	Re: La Aurora Painting very nice!! __________________ Surf's Up!

10-07-2009, 09:25 PM	#12
muhren The Cigar Artist Join Date: Sep 2009 First Name: Mike Location: Ohio Posts: 1,268 Trading: (43)	Re: La Aurora Painting Sorry, I deleted the originals from my gallery on here...now, they're gone from the post. Well, at least the final piece is still there!

10-08-2009, 03:29 PM	#13
Azpostal Feeling at Home Join Date: Jun 2009 First Name: Don Location: Arizona Posts: 511 Trading: (9)	Re: La Aurora Painting Nice painting.