Poetry Cornered

04-08-2009, 10:31 AM

Thought it would be a good idea to have a place where one can post or view bits of poemic shmimsy. You know. To educate and enlighten the place.
I'll start. This poems presents itself as an internal argument with the poet. It is deceptively simple, but raises deep moral and philosophical questions about the nature of man.

Who Am I?

Who am I?
And who are you?
I am me
But are you you?

Together we are we
But I am still me
And you are still you.

Who are you
And how did you get in my room?

Seriously dude.

Put some pants on.

pnoon · 04-08-2009, 10:33 AM

Best you check for carbon monoxide leaks.

Genetic Defect · 04-08-2009, 10:51 AM

WildBlueSooner · 04-08-2009, 04:10 PM

I love that poem!

icehog3 · 04-08-2009, 04:51 PM

Sitting with the Queen having tea,
She asked "Do you fart when you pee?",
I thought for a bit,
And asked "Do you belch when you sh#t?",
And thought that was quite clever of me.

04-08-2009, 06:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3

Sitting with the Queen having tea,
She asked "Do you fart when you pee?",
I thought for a bit,
And asked "Do you belch when you sh#t?",
And thought that was quite clever of me.

You, sir, are the Tennyson to my Coleridge!

WildBlueSooner · 04-08-2009, 06:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3

Sitting with the Queen having tea,
She asked "Do you fart when you pee?",
I thought for a bit,
And asked "Do you belch when you sh#t?",
And thought that was quite clever of me.

To answer your questions Tom, yes and yes!

Starscream · 04-09-2009, 07:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by icehog3

Sitting with the Queen having tea,
She asked "Do you fart when you pee?",
I thought for a bit,
And asked "Do you belch when you sh#t?",
And thought that was quite clever of me.

Nice.

Scottw · 04-08-2009, 05:06 PM

There once was a girl from Nantucket..................................

04-08-2009, 10:31 AM	#1
bookman Guest Posts: n/a	Poetry Cornered Thought it would be a good idea to have a place where one can post or view bits of poemic shmimsy. You know. To educate and enlighten the place. I'll start. This poems presents itself as an internal argument with the poet. It is deceptively simple, but raises deep moral and philosophical questions about the nature of man. Who Am I? Who am I? And who are you? I am me But are you you? Together we are we But I am still me And you are still you. Who are you And how did you get in my room? Seriously dude. Put some pants on.

04-08-2009, 10:33 AM	#2
pnoon YNWA Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Peter Location: San Diego Posts: 29,919 Trading: (20)	Re: Poetry Cornered Best you check for carbon monoxide leaks. __________________ Be more concerned with your character than your reputation, because your character is what you really are, while your reputation is merely what others think you are. -John Wooden

04-08-2009, 10:51 AM	#3
Genetic Defect difetosso Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Perry Location: An elevator Posts: 5,202 Trading: (5)	Re: Poetry Cornered __________________ I'm an outcast riding into town alone I got wanderlust branded deeper than the bone

04-08-2009, 04:10 PM	#4
WildBlueSooner I'm nuts for the place Join Date: Feb 2009 First Name: James Location: Lexington, KY Posts: 3,322 Trading: (19)	Re: Poetry Cornered I love that poem! __________________ "To dilute the will to win is to destroy the purpose of the game. There is no substitute for victory"-- Douglas MacArthur

04-08-2009, 04:51 PM	#5
icehog3 Admiral Douchebag Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Tom Location: Clermont, Kentucky Posts: 71,441 Trading: (60)	Re: Poetry Cornered Sitting with the Queen having tea, She asked "Do you fart when you pee?", I thought for a bit, And asked "Do you belch when you sh#t?", And thought that was quite clever of me. __________________ Thanks Dave, Julian, James, Kelly, Peter, Gerry, Dave, Mo, Frank, Týr and Mr. Mark!

04-08-2009, 05:06 PM	#9
Scottw Going Commando Join Date: Oct 2008 First Name: Scott Location: Sussex, NJ Posts: 2,815 Trading: (6)	Re: Poetry Cornered There once was a girl from Nantucket.................................. __________________ "Ray when someone asks you if your a GOD you say yes."

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