Oh come on, Tom! I share my honest opinion and you zoom in on my attempt to be brief on how to tell her to loose the perfume?
Ok. You're right.

A more appropriate presentation would be something on the order of: "
Excuse me, Miss (insert name). We've noticed you wear a lot of perfume. You see, the enjoyment of fine cigars is about the essence of flavors and aroma. People who enjoy fine cigars often find the excessive perfume somewhat of a distraction and perhaps even a bit offensive in this environment. Would you please consider using less perfume when you are scheduled to work here?"
Happy now?