Forum: General Discussion
03-23-2014, 04:09 PM
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Re: Need Help - Re: Trauma/Doctor/Gunshot
Noooo - I believe we have enough damage with a shot to back, bouncing off the rib cage and leaving a sucking wound out the front. Plus I forgot to mention that she has heavy scar tissue across her...
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 09:18 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 09:12 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 09:01 PM
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Re: Need Help - Re: Trauma/Doctor/Gunshot
Thanks for the comments/notes/suggestions! Everything helps.
Just to expand a little more - when I say "accidental discharge" what really happens is this:
Our protagonist is an assassin who...
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 08:43 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 02:52 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 02:30 PM
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Re: Need Help - Re: Trauma/Doctor/Gunshot
And I might need to take you up on that! I have a 13 year old niece who absolutely loved the first book (she did not know that I wrote it) who is playing the part of the Dutch nurse. Currently she is...
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 02:25 PM
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Re: Need Help - Re: Trauma/Doctor/Gunshot
Actually it does help. This is something that the nurse may know or discover when she treats the wound(s).
As the story focus is not so much on the weapon itself - but the fact that one is...
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 02:18 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 01:52 PM
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Re: Need Help - Re: Trauma/Doctor/Gunshot
Great! This information really helps and that’s a good chart and info on the web page there. I literally have hundreds of pages of research.
The important thing here, for me, is that the reader...
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 01:25 AM
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Re: Need Help - Re: Trauma/Doctor/Gunshot
Thanks Cliff -
Not that it makes a difference, but it's technically a matchlock instead of a flintlock as I first stated.
As far as the story goes - this scene takes place near the end of the...
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Forum: General Discussion
03-22-2014, 01:03 AM
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Re: Need Help - Re: Trauma/Doctor/Gunshot
Thanks - yeah it does sound bad - just need to figure out how to keep her alive! Didn't think this far enough through when first writing the story.
Also - if anyone would like a free copy of...
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Forum: General Discussion
03-21-2014, 10:32 PM
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Need Help - Re: Trauma/Doctor/Gunshot
Hey Guys -
In writing my third novel, I am having a difficult time finding some information that I need. So if anyone could help out it would be greatly appreciated. Google is not being my...
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Forum: General Discussion
12-27-2013, 05:20 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
12-14-2013, 11:47 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
11-16-2013, 06:10 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
09-28-2013, 12:23 PM
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Re: My Granddaughter
Thanks guys - she is such a good baby. She is a pretty content baby unlike her mother was at that age - but more like her aunt (my first). Steph has to wake her up for night time feedings. She had...
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Forum: General Discussion
09-28-2013, 12:15 PM
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Re: What are you reading?
Well I've been pretty busy but have managed to read:
Wayward by Blake Crouch (You need to read Pines first)
Walk the Sky by Robert Swartwood
Dust by Hugh Howey
Hit and Three (both Chandler...
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09-28-2013, 04:21 AM
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My Granddaughter
My first grandchild - Sophia Dillon Moss. 21" 8.6 pounds - 9-24-2013. Slight complication with my daughter - but both are home and healthy now.
Ron <---- Proud Granddad
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09-15-2013, 09:45 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
07-07-2013, 09:59 AM
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07-05-2013, 09:01 PM
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Atlantic City Boardwalk Help Needed -
Every year at this time we go to Atlantic City for a bowling tournament. One of the highlights has always been being able to sit on the boardwalk, eat dinner, smoke, drink and guess the pricing on...
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Forum: General Discussion
04-11-2013, 03:01 PM
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Re: So I Got Pulled Over And . . .
A few years ago I got a speeding ticket where I actually had to go to court over.
Prior to going to court I went online and took one of those driver courses. When I got to court the Judge asked...
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Forum: General Discussion
04-11-2013, 02:52 PM
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Forum: General Discussion
04-11-2013, 08:48 AM
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So I Got Pulled Over And . . .
So Wednesday morning was the best TRAFFIC STOP that I have ever had the pleasure of being stopped for. Job down in Solomon Islands that I’m going to so it’s a little after 5:30am, 4 lane divided...
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